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I don’t see why you would
Miss me—no, I don’t see
How the world would
Be robbed of anything if
I just stopped existing.
Who would mourn
The demise of one
So cruel, so cold,
So soulless? I am
Not a creature
Of good, merely
A demon in
Disguise, an
Evil spawn of
Shadows and
Poison. I advise
You most
Passionately to
Take up your
Stakes and drive
Them through
My cold and
Motionless heart.
Here I am, having disappointed her again. . .what kind of friend am I? What kind of person am I? One who certainly does not deserve to live in a world where she does. She hated me, and I deserve her hatred, and so much more . . . I deserve her scorn, I deserve physial pain at her hands . . . I deserve death.
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52Cardds Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2008
Ha, reminds me a lot of myself.
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Awww.
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52Cardds Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
I really like the lines:

"Not a creature
Of good, merely
A demon in
Disguise [...]"
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thanks.
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Fa-il Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008
I thought this poem would eat me.
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you? :lol:
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toria-doc Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Love the emotion here, and the sarcasm. Or at least, that's how it appeared to me. Very dramatic- and that goes for your artist's comments too. Are you ok?
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) I am now. Thanks for asking.
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toria-doc Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
That's ok :) I'm glad :hug:
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:iconnewglomp:
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mode-de-vie Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Student Writer
I love the emotion that there is in this. You feel a sense of guilt, loss, disappointment. This is well written. :thumbsup: Good work.
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thanks!
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SopranoDancer Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
Wow that is some really intense emotion!!!! It practically jumps of the page!!! (that phrase is extremely chiche, i know, but it's true... haha) Instant fave!!!!

and btw, are you okay?!?!
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thank you!

I am now. :) We resolved everything, it's all right. :hug: Thanks.
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SopranoDancer Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
good :iconbackhug:
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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TheCoalMineCanary Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
You, my friend, have some real talent. *applauds*

Amazing job.
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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TEC-ThePenOfMerlin Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
Bella, Bella, Bella...

If I asked what you did, would I get an answer?

Merlin
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I just haven't been around for her the way that I should be. . .I told her I would sign on to AIM in fifteen minutes, and I got back to her at 5 p.m. the next day . . . stupid stuff like that.
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samiclayvivianmel Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2009
Was it simply because you forgot, or did something else important (or seemingly important at the time, or more important to your parents than you friend) come up that had to be addressed? The reason makes as much difference as the flaw.
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TEC-ThePenOfMerlin Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
...

And absentmindedness makes you an evil person?

Merlin
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
No, I just do it a lot when I promise her I'll change.
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TEC-ThePenOfMerlin Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008
:hug:

Merlin
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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surfnmurf333 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
i can totally understnad where u r coming from..i've mad alot of mistkes in the past...I've regreted it terribly, & i still do sometimes...the thing is that u live & learn..take wa u learned & move on w/ ur life. Life doesn't stop..it moves on..its apart of nature..the world goes on..keeps moving..my point is that yea we make mistakes but we can't live the rest of our lives lettting it haunt us..we just gotta move forward w/ what we learned. I hope this helped a little.=) <3 & Peace/
Paige
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thank you.
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surfnmurf333 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
=)ur welcome
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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surfnmurf333 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
*huggles all around*
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Yay for huggles!
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surfnmurf333 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
yeay! *huggles*
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:lmao:
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
this one is one of my favorite of ur poems ;) i sooo relate to the 1rst 5 lines
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Rythmear Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:

Your writings certainly aren't lacking in emotional whallop.
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Rythmear Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
^^ my pleasure
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Rythmear Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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BellaPotter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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